First revisions made to the testimonial above ads:

Image one: This revision is based on my previous testimonial ads created for my project in my Effective Copywriting class project. The revision I made were the following: 

- I added the contact information for Women Employed to the bottom left of the ad

- I moved the body copy up close to the the person and made it more justified. 

- The headline is placed at the top with "proactive" in Impact font. The purpose to call attention to the reader. 

- Also, "don't hold yourself back" is made as a subheading". 

Image two: This a revision to my previous testimonial ads created for my project in my Effective Copywriting class project. The revision I made was the following: 

- Women Employed address is placed at the bottom of the ad to show to provide to the readers the organization information. 

Image three: The revision I made to the Marilyn Monroe testimonial ad were the following: 

-The font of the headline has changed. “Become” is in script font while the word “Powerful” is in impact.

-The color for the word “powerful” is now in red to create emotion to the ad.

-I changed the size of the image and moved it up to allow the body text show clearer.

-The logo has been placed at the bottom right of the ad with the address next to in a serif font.